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你與7分的距離就在這裡.

Do you like fast food? Why or why not? 你會怎麼回答這題?

Band 5–6 答案(基礎,缺乏展開)

“Yes, I like fast food because it is tasty and quick. I often eat hamburgers and fried chicken. But I know it is not healthy, so I don’t eat it every day.”

分析:

  • 優點:有回答問題(Yes + 理由)。
  • 缺點
    • 詞彙過於簡單(tasty, quick, not healthy)。
    • 句子多為短句,缺少連接詞。
    • 沒有細節或例子,顯得像列點。
    • 聽起來像背小短句,缺少自然性。

IELTS Speaking Part 1,考官主要評分四個面向:

  1. Fluency and Coherence(流暢與連貫)
  2. Lexical Resource(詞彙資源)
  3. Grammatical Range and Accuracy(文法範圍與準確度)
  4. Pronunciation(口音清晰度)

一個 Band 7–8 的答案通常會有:

範例答案(Band 7–8)

“Yes, I do enjoy fast food, but only occasionally. I like it mainly because it’s convenient and saves me time, especially when I have a busy schedule and don’t feel like cooking. For example, grabbing a burger on the way home after a long day can be quite comforting. However, I try not to eat it too often since it’s not very healthy in the long run. I prefer to balance it with home-cooked meals, which are usually fresher and more nutritious.”

語法結構多變(not only…but also, although, relative clauses, conditionals)

直接回答問題(Yes/No + 理由)

展開解釋(不只一句)

使用多樣詞彙(不只 deliciousgood

有例子或個人經驗

為什麼這是 7–8 分的答案?

  • 直接回答問題(Yes, I do enjoy fast food, but only occasionally.)
  • 詞彙多樣(convenient, saves me time, comforting, in the long run, nutritious)
  • 句型多樣(especially when…, not only…but also, however, since)
  • 流暢展開(理由 + 例子 + 對比 + 個人習慣)
  • 自然真實(不像背稿,而是日常語氣)

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